Writing Teen Novels with Kaz Delaney

Yesterday afternoon I had the pleasure of attending an author event with the delightful Kaz Delaney at Wangi Library. Kaz was there to talk about writing for teens and young adults. It was a nice small gathering, just under 20, people who were readers, writers, and book lovers alike. I have seen Kaz speak at multiple events and it is always a pleasure to see to her, as always she was delightful, larger than life and very friendly.

Kaz told us all about how she grew up in and around Newcastle, a Novacastrian born and bred. She also regaled us with stories about growing up and some of the adventures she had. One of my favourite things about author talks is hearing about how they came to be an author. There are always people wanting to know how to get published, but those stories aren’t the same as hearing how an author got published in my opinion. The personal journey of each author is different and fascinating and Kaz’s was no different. One of the things that stayed with me was that she said she had always planned on sending something in but life got in the way. It is reassuring to hear that life pushes its way into the plans of everybody and it isn’t something to feel bad about, especially when it can’t be helped.

With her 20th year of publishing this year Kaz has 70 books under her belt writing across the board, for teenagers and children alike. Her first big lesson learnt was to trust the editor who had critiqued her first submitted story and while she admits her entry into the writing world was a fairly easy entrée, it did not mean it wasn’t hard work and she acknowledges she was very fortunate. But she has also had her share of rejection, and another interesting lesson she gave us was that in her opinion you can’t really call yourself an author until you’ve been rejected. But you must also see the rejection for what it is, nothing against you personally but rather a critique on the work, separate yourself from it and don’t let it get you down.

Kaz spoke about how it is tough to be author, much harder than it was 20 years ago but noted there are more opportunities for writers these days. What was interesting was Kaz’s take on it. She understands that it gives people more chances but it has the possibility of harming the industry. This I completely understand, with the self publishing world taking off, more people can be published but there is a risk that the quality is not at the same standard as the traditional publishing route is known for, reducing the quality of the work that is being released. As Kaz mentioned, there is a lot of work that gets put out there that was rejected for a reason, and with people anxious to get their work out they don’t always do the extra work to make it right, people need to do themselves the best favour they can when it comes to getting their work out there.

Just before she finished up Kaz gave us some great advice on teen writing. She gave us ten excellent tips in making sure the work is authentic, and of good quality, including a few great insights we should remember. I would love to look at these points in more detail but I won’t do it here, but her top ten list is some excellent advice in how to make your young adult novel, any story really, work for you.

  1. See the world through the eyes of a character. Continually remind yourself who is telling the story.
  2. Don’t get distracted by sparkly things, that is don’t be distracted by a great new idea if it doesn’t fit within your story.
  3. Decisions made by characters must make emotional sense, most teen decisions won’t make logical sense but they must make emotional sense.
  4. Popular culture references can ground or not ground a story so you should be careful, and be wary of copyright issues.
  5. Swearing/not swearing, sex, drugs etc cannot be ignored. You can’t write for teens without tipping your hat to it.
  6. Pacing the novel is important.
  7. There is always hope. You don’t need to end with happily ever after but you always need hope.
  8. Know your genre. Read other books in your genre and notice themes, style etc to guide you.
  9. Love your audience. It’s hard to write in and hard to get published if you don’t like your audience. If you don’t like children and teens don’t write for them.
  10. Don’t limit yourself to writing for young adult.

If you ever get to see Kaz or any author at an event it is never a wasted moment. You can learn so much about writing and books, even if you are not interested in creating yourself it is always wonderful hearing from your favourite author and it lets them know they’re appreciated as well. It is truly a great time and yesterday was another one of those great events I was glad to have attended.

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The National Book Bloggers Forum 2014 Recap Part One

RHA_Bloggers2014_Badge1A few weeks ago I had the pleasure and honour of attending the very first Penguin Random House National Book Bloggers Forum held in the Random House Australia office in Sydney. For those on Twitter you were no doubt flooded with many tweets and retweets from yours truly and many others, especially if you were following the #NBBF14 tag. It was filled with wonderful pictures, many quotes and great reactions as each session progressed, new books were being revealed to us, and general excitements of the day.

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The goodie bags

I have been to many writers festivals and authors events before so going to a forum that is just about book bloggers was certainly exciting and very intriguing. Sitting at train station in the early hours of the morning I was thinking about how wonderful it would be to meet other book bloggers and after chatting with a few people throughout the day it is evident there are many different types of book blogs and wonderful people attached to them.

I’m not sure of the final numbers but looking around the room there were a few dozen of us, not to mention the lovely people from Random House and Felicity from Penguin Australia as well. Upon arrival we all gathered and chatted amongst ourselves as people continued arriving, getting our name tags, introducing ourselves to people already there and people just arriving. We were also spoilt with the gift of a goodie bag filled with books for us to take home, many I had heard of and some I hadn’t. After going through our swag and chatting with people it wasn’t long before we were making our way to our seats and got ready for a day filled with great sessions, interesting discussions, and more wonderful surprises.

Brett Osmond, the Director of Marketing and Publicity from Random House, welcomed us and the day officially began. What was wonderful was that Brett acknowledged us as bloggers as part of the book industry. He told us that we too are in the business of connecting readers with books, and when you connect books with readers “magical things can happen”.

Brett spoke about how publishing was changing, and how while nothing changed in the first 15-20 years of his career, the last three years alone have changed dramatically. After years of doing the same thing and selling to the same customer things were changing, they were becoming more sophisticated. Three years ago they had not sold an ebook in Australia and now they are 20% of their business.

He also told us Australians are some of the highest readers in the world, and added it doesn’t matter what format people read in as long as they read. It doesn’t matter if they are loose pages, tablet or Kindle, hardcover or paperback, what matters is the engagement and education reading can fuel. An excellent argument I agree wholeheartedly with.

P1150030After Brett spoke there were some wonderful tips and tricks explained to us by the digital guru’s of Random House as Eve and Ellie spoke to us about the digital aspects of blogging. Eve spoke about web analytics and how we can understand who is visiting our blogs and how to understand all the numbers that our stats generate. Ellie also helped us to understand the power and role social media can have in our blogging ventures. I found this session really helpful, not just about reading the numbers, but finding new and exciting ways to connect with people online, not only through my blog but through other social media as well.

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Sneh Roy chatting about her blogging

Up next was Sneh Roy to talk about her blog-to-book experience. Sneh was the winner of the Best Australian Blogs Competition 2013 and is now the author of the new book Tasty Express. Sneh told us about her blogging experience and how she started blogging ten years ago, she also told us about her creative process when it comes to blogging. She gave us a few inspirational messages that were really important to remember such as blog for yourself rather than anyone else, don’t get bogged down by trends, and content is the most important thing, it precedes everything else.

Audience questions included asking how long a typical post took (4-6 hours including cooking, writing, and photographing); were mobile devices the cause of possible dwindling comments (Sometimes, especially if autocorrect becomes troublesome it can seem like too much of an effort to make it work properly on a device, plus there are so many more things out there and people have short attention spans and may not take the time); and when did blogging become more than a hobby (it is still a hobby, Sneh is a wife, mum, and blogger all in one, and she works around school times). She added that opportunities had come along, she took jobs, talked to people and it simply developed from there.

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The excellent morning tea made by Sneh

After these three talks had concluded, all this information been processed, and the lucky door prize had been drawn to win a copy of Sneh’s book (I was not successful in that part), it was still only 11 o’clock!

We took a break to have a wonderful morning tea prepared by Sneh and discussed the morning. Having no idea what to expect from this day it was going pretty well, I had met a few people and learnt a lot already and with so much of the day left to go it was shaping up to be a great day!

Stay tuned for part two!

Space Sushi by L. R. Currell

Published: 7th June 2014
3349b-goodreads-buttonPublisher: 
Smashwords Edition
Pages: 33
Format: ebook
Genre: 
Short Story
★   ★   ★   ★   ★   – 5 Stars

This story is part of the upcoming inaugural “Futuristic in Nature” anthology which will be released annually. Volume one will be available in July/August. 


Chang Luis Sahari is the most celebrated food critic in the cosmos.
  But the competition is always snapping at his heels. 

Set 100 years in the future, Space Sushi follows a passionate food critic as he faces his hardest challenge yet. A dish which is such a delicacy that it is only enjoyed by the rich and the elite. A tasty delight that is as potent as it is gorgeous with the potential to kill him. The culinary wonder is poisonous and there is no known antidote. Death is guaranteed if the poison is digested, already it has claimed an impressive number of victims.

There are very few chefs who can prepare it with the meticulous care necessary to make it safely edible. 

Chang’s employer sends him to the universally renowned Chef Nikons restaurant to sample the notorious Ambrozian sea slug from the Andromeda galaxy. Despite being in the care of a personal friend and a gastronomic legend who has prepared the dish fifteen times Chang still feels extremely nervous. 

After all, it isn’t every day that you sample a meal that could be your last.

I was asked for a review by the author

Space Sushi is a short story that is very well told with an equal balance of information, anticipation, and good writing. Currell tells the story in a light but detailed manner that is engaging and makes you eager for not just the outcome but the journey towards it. Set one hundred years in the future there are similarities to the present world but also new technologies that represent the advancements that have been made, while also touching on a few downsides.

Throughout the story we learn about the main character Chang and his food critic profession, how he is so skilled, and why he is one of the best. Asked to try the dish by his boss in order to help the company cyberzine sales, Chang attends the yet to be officially opened restaurant where his friend Chef Nikon is to prepare it. With his T 21 worker bot Tablet at his side, Chang prepares himself to taste the prominent dish, the wonder of the cosmos that is supposedly delicious but with a touch of danger attached.

As a character Chang is used well in establishing the atmosphere of not just the nervousness about what he is experiencing and anticipating, but also providing a wider context, history, and supporting details about the world in which the story is set. We are provided with an intense build up about what may and has already happened to people from consuming this esteemed and potentially poisoned dish so as a reader you understand why Chang is nervous and why the dish is famed and loved by those who can afford it.

While we wait alongside Chang as his dish is prepared we are hidden from what is happening in the kitchen, aside from what the Chef Nikon tells us when he emerges on occasion, as well as any details provided by Chang’s personal waitress that evening Judy. Being the only customer in the restaurant we are allowed to focus on Chang and the other three characters. We follow their interactions with Chang and we use their conversations to aid the story and build on the narrative. It isn’t until you finish the story that you really notice just how well Currell uses these other characters either. Everything plays together in telling this story and by limiting the descriptive aspect in the story so much of our knowledge is provided through the conversations and interactions among the characters.

Space Sushi is a wonderful short story with a narrative that manages to entertain but also build up your own anticipation and nervousness as you get involved with Chang’s story. You become captured in the story and by the end of it you are left wanting more.

And the winners are…

Giveaway winners

Thank you all who entered the giveaway! I have drawn the winners using random.org and I am very pleased to announce that the five lucky people who have won an ecopy of Before Nightfall by Rachel Amphlett are:

Daystarz Books

Michelle V

brendat59

Vasi

allvce 

The winners have been notified by email. Congratulations everyone!

Before Nightfall by Rachel Amphlett

3349b-goodreads-buttonPublished: 5th June 2014
Publisher:
Self Published
Pages:
576
Format:
ebook
Genre:
Suspense/Romance
★   ★   ★   ★   ★   – 5 Stars

“If they move you, they will kill you.”

Kate Foster is quick to forget the advice from a pre-deployment hostage survival course once she’s catapulted into a new job in Eastern Europe, despite the good-looking instructor. But a simple day’s task in Istanbul six months later goes horribly wrong. 

Trapped and alone, her only hope of survival is the man who trained her – ex-FBI Hostage Rescue Specialist, Finn Scott.

For Finn, it’s his worst nightmare. Kate was the one person he almost let into his heart. Haunted by memories of a failed hostage rescue, he is thrust into a situation beyond his control. Now, against a sinister adversary whose ambitions will split apart Eastern Europe, Finn must overcome his demons to prevent an international catastrophe.

And avoid losing Kate forever.

Note: I was given a copy of this book to review

Before Nightfall is an engaging story that keeps you guessing and hoping for a happy ending while offering interesting and unique characters that always have something up their sleeve and secrets to hide.

The story involves Kate, a woman who was looking to challenge herself and applies to work overseas in the Business Development division of a company. For staff safety she must undergoes hostage training, but does not hold up to the standards expected by her interrogator Finn Scott. Despite this, she already has the job, and inexperienced or not, she gets to go overseas with her new boss Ian Hart. Now, six months later when a routine trip in Istanbul gets her kidnapped, she must rely on the information she was told during her training, try to recall anything that will help her stay alive.

As a character Kate is one we are meant to worry about. We are shown and reminded continuously that she may not be able to cope with her situation, that she was unprepared and seemingly unqualified despite her training. While we do see a small part of this, Kate actually comes through quite well, she is strong and clever, and while it doesn’t always show, the strength underneath is quite powerful, even if it is not in the manner we are expecting.

There is a mystery about why Kate has been taken, we are given hints and clues but no real reason at first. When the answers are revealed it soon becomes a complicated and intriguing series of events that reveal so much more than what you first anticipate. What Amphlett does reveal is explained well. The secrets Finn won’t discuss, the half truths given by Hart, the unspoken words of seemingly innocent characters. It’s all there, and all waiting to be unearthed in a truly suspenseful style.

There is enough romance, suspense, and twists to keep you satisfied and it’s a story that keeps its secrets close. I liked that the strong romance elements were kept at a minimum, but I liked the restrained ongoing and obvious unspoken attraction between Finn and Kate. I enjoyed watching them pine for one another without doing anything about it, almost denying to themselves something was even there. Finn’s tormented soul made the storyline interesting away from the kidnapping, while still connecting them together.

I really liked how Amphlett handles the hostage and kidnapping aspects. Kate is portrayed in a way that suits her character well, she is strong, but inexperienced but she is also determined. Amphlett isn’t trying to make her out to be an unbreakable force, but she is not entirely out of her depth either.

With no spoilers I will say that by the end of the book when everything comes to light and everything is revealed, you realise how creative and clever Amphlett has been. It doesn’t go in the direction you think, nor do anyone’s secrets turn out to be what you suspect either. It is a great book that brings enough romance, suspense, action, and uniqueness meaning there is a little something for everyone to enjoy.

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