Adrian Lessons by L. A. Rose

Published: 24th August 2014
Goodreads badgePublisher: Self Published
Pages: 237
Format: ebook
Genre: New Adult Contemporary Romance
★   ★   ★   ★  – 4 Stars

AdrianLessonsCoverIf there’s one thing Cleo Reynolds knows, it’s that she’s not into Adrian King.

The son of a model with the looks to prove it, the experienced author of her school newspaper’s sex advice column, the cocky playboy with a hint of darkness. That Adrian King.

Nope. Nuh-uh. No way.

The problem is, he’s very into her.

After accidentally flashing him, and slightly-less-accidentally-but-still-totally-unintentionally making out with him in front of the whole class, she expects to be called crazy. Instead, he asks her out.

Cleo’s determined not to end up as another notch on his bedpost. Except she hasn’t done…you know…it in a while. (Read: ever.) And as a girl who pays her tuition by writing all the sex scenes in her roommate’s bestselling romance series, the lack of inspiration has served up a fat slice of writer’s block.

Until her roommate proposes that Cleo and Adrian act out all the steamy scenes in her book.

It’s just research. No feelings involved.

Nope. Nuh-uh.

No way.

Note: I was given a copy for review

Adrian Lessons is a new adult contemporary romance and after finishing this book I can certainly say it is certainly more adult than not. The story revolves around Cleo, writer of erotic fanfiction and ghost writer for the sex scenes in her friend’s romance novels, soon finds herself infatuated by a guy in her class, Adonis-like Adrian King. Conflicted and lustful she tries to fight her feelings but is soon drawn into those green eyes.

Adrian is a character that knows that he is hot and isn’t too shy to admit it, but in a strange way it doesn’t make him come across as vain, or arrogant. He knows what he wants and surprisingly it isn’t what you expect. His affection and admiration for Cleo makes him charming, something that works well having getting to know him and seeing his perspective. I think if Rose had chosen to have Adrian as a character we see only from Cleo’s perspective there would not be the same connection and feeling he brings to the story, especially where dialogue is concerned, and his character would not be as likeable. His affection for Cleo and the fact he does so many things just for her warms your heart and puts you on his side almost immediately, you really can’t ignore how sweet and thoughtful he is with her. You soon realise he isn’t what you expect and there is more to him than meets the eye. To quote Cleo: He’s not just a gorgeous playboy with a cocky smile and an empty head.

She does have her reasons for her initial reluctant approach. She is working from reputation rather than acknowledging her true feelings or trusting him. The fact that he is hiding a secret and an advantage doesn’t help but it makes it an interesting read watching the two of them interact, picking up the references and information Rose drops along the way.

Cleo thinks Adrian is only there for the sex, but he proves her wrong and it is quite sweet and thoughtful, though he does have desires of his own they aren’t the sole focus of his courtship. Being inside his mind and knowing this from that start gives us an advantage and only helps our opinion of him, we are on his side from early on, hoping he’ll succeed.

I liked Cleo; she is self conscious, always doubting herself and her looks, but is also a little wild and crazy at the same time. She talks to her organs, gives herself pep talks, and she has a relationship and conversations with inanimate objects. This I understand. She also has enough sense to be cautious and wary, but not so much that she won’t take chances and have fun.

Adrian is also not the jovial character he seems with his dark side being uncovered and with secrets he’s reluctant to share. Even though we are given a deeper, darker side to Adrian that only added to his character, I wanted more. I could sense there was more hiding behind that smile and charm, something Cleo picks up on and I knew there was more to be revealed, but nothing else came. I know it wouldn’t have added to the story any more than it had already, but it would have been nice to explore it more deeply, not to make him dark and broody, but to show another depth to him, but this was already done well so I may just be greedy.

The story Rose has written is real and feels natural to a point. Yes it is mostly about a college girl helping to write sex scenes for her roommate’s novels, sometimes by acting them out to a point for inspiration, but there is greater reality in the narrative as well with character emotions and the relationships feel natural and suit the characters well.

With a story like this you can’t ignore the romance and the desire but it isn’t the flowery romance, at least not initially and what comes later is less flowery, more passion, lust, and desire. With things like that Cleo has the advantage given that she writes erotic fanfiction and the scenes for her roommate but it doesn’t take over her life and she doesn’t speak or think like that. The focus on desire and sex may be ongoing to varying degrees but it fits well with the story and if you don’t mind a few sex scenes that are detailed but not too crass then it is easy to get caught up in the romance side and the connection and affection between Cleo and Adrian.

The sexual nature and details increase as the novel progresses, I liked that Rose established the non sexual connection first though, this gave you something to build from and it gives it a lot more meaning. I don’t read romance or stories with a lot of sex in them often so I’m not sure what the rules are regarding this or adequate amounts included and detailed, but Rose works it into the story well and with believability. While I think I enjoyed the romancing side rather than the sex side I understand its importance. It isn’t there for the sake of it and it is pertinent really to the relationship between Cleo and Adrian, it shows their developing relationship as well as the intensity of their emotions. I will say it is often told in great detail and is clearly of an adult nature, nothing is implied it is all there, but while it does get quite detailed, it also never feels out of place. Cleo’s and Adrian’s relationship isn’t based on sex, but in a strange way it also is and it really does work well.

In terms of style, the writing and voice is good. It is engaging and the switch between Cleo and Adrian gives you more of the story and adds to the character’s relationships by offering both sides. What I found interesting was that they both are written with the knowledge that a reader is reading it, something I was surprised by, especially considering some of the content. It doesn’t take away from anything but it was interesting. There are narratives written like they are being told to someone, but it is another thing to break the wall and acknowledge it.

Overall I enjoyed the book. It was what I was expecting while not at the same time. With an interesting narrative concept it focuses on the characters with Rose using the plot well to highlight each of them, even if only momentarily. The characters have depth and are unique, bringing something of themselves into many moments making it light and humorous, while also grounding it and showing the complexities of relationships and the people involved. Adrian’s Lessons is a novel for those who want a touching story filled with adoration and the joys and complications of young love, but one that is also filled with the passion and desires that go with it.

Reho (#1) by D. L. Denham

Published: 30th July 2014
Goodreads badgePublisher: BlackHats Publishing
Pages: 334
Format: ebook
Genre: Science Fiction
★   ★   ★   ★  – 4 Stars

Nuclear war destroyed the OldWorld. But that was just the beginning. During humanity’s darkest hour, an ancient alien race struck, waging a two-year war with Earth’s survivors. Having lost, humankind scattered, waiting for the day to reclaim their planet.

Reho, a young, survival-hardened man wandering the Blastlands of Usona, searches for redemption as he teams up with a motley merchant crew on their way to deliver OldWorld GPS devices to New Afrika. Haunted by his past, Reho must discover the truth about his own origins while thrown headfirst into a war that will not only alter his future, but the future of all humankind.

 Note: I was provided a copy of this book for review

Having not read the prelude Red Denver, I knew nothing about Reho or about this world. It did not matter though, the story is intriguing and as you read you slowly understand what this world is like and the history of its people and past events. Denham writes in a way that gradually pulls you into the story, slowly bringing you into the world that has been created and the characters that fill it. I found it hard to stop reading once I started; wanting to know what was going to happen and wanting to find answers to the numerous mysteries that had been raised.

Information is given out as needed, mixing it together fluidly within the narrative and character thoughts freeing us from long information paragraphs making it seem very natural. The added bonus of this is also you get information and explanation at appropriate times and relevant to current scenes. You pick up on hints and clues, using references and descriptions to piece things together, but you are also given intentional history as well. This makes the narrative even better because while the story grabs you early on and sparks your interest, having a seamless story as well while still giving readers all the information they need is wonderful.

As a character Reho is quite likeable. He is young but tough, having survived on his own for years and often having to fight his way out of situations. In a post invasion, war-like world it is every man for himself, especially in the Blastlands. Reho has become hard and tired, but when he tries to return to his home it isn’t like it was before he left. With no real idea about where he is going, he teams up with a merchant crew, helping them deliver goods to New Afrika.

Through the book Reho’s nature softens a little, not a lot, but enough, no doubt from his engagement with other people that isn’t fighting, working with others, and finding pretty women to talk to. Reho is highlighted early on for being different, but for reasons neither he nor the reader fully understands yet.  But through his travels and the experiences Reho has, along with the numerous people he meets and joins forces with, it soon becomes clear just who Reho is and what his role is in the ongoing war to take back what the alien invasion has taken from humankind.

There are great, unexpected things in this story, not even huge twists exactly, but you never know what is going to happen and it makes the story exciting because anything could be in the next chapter and characters can say and do anything. Plans change, things are revealed, and what you thought you knew you no longer are sure of. The post invasion world Denham has created is fascinating with each settlement so different from one another and it shows how adaptable humans can be, but also how different people react to things and how they cope.

Along with helping the others, Reho has a mystery of his own to solve, and new ones come up the more he is exposed to other places. Denham always seems to give you something to look forward to, whether it is a new city, or finding out whether someone survives an attack, but also in the long run you look forward to finding out about the big picture, and what answers it will bring. There is a great feeling of suspense and anticipation as well that drives you towards the ending, with no way of knowing what is to come and it leaves you wanting more after the last page. This is a story that offers hope to its characters and the reader, but not without consequence, and it shows you that war is war and there are going to be casualties and costs.

If you don’t read the prelude, Reho is still a great introduction to the Hegemon Wars series. There is a fulfilling understanding and establishment of the history and the world, with character that are all unique, complicated, and mysterious as well as a conclusion that leaves you satisfied but eager for more. From what Denham has given us so far this series could go anywhere and I look forward to finding out where that is.

Secrets of the Elders (#1) by David Matthew Almond

Published: 5th June 2014
Goodreads badgePublisher: CreateSpace
Pages: 320
Format: ebook
Genre: Fantasy
★   ★   ★  – 3 Stars

After their peaceful village, Riverbell, is raided by the foul monstrous skex, brothers Logan and Corbin Walker find themselves caught in a race against time, desperate to warn the capitol before the deadly skex arrive to wreak the same havoc upon the unsuspecting people of Fal.

Never could they imagine, that this would only be the very beginning of their unforgettable journey, when Logan is suddenly exiled from the kingdom for a crime he did not commit. On the run, doggedly avoiding his own brother, sent to pursue the wanted criminal, can Logan Walker possibly hope to stay free long enough to unravel the Secrets of the Elders?

And So the Fourth Age of Acadia begins…

The World of Acadia

Ages long past, forced to abandon the surface, mankind descended inside the core of their planet, fleeing an impending xenocide at the hands of the mighty Jotnar invaders and settling a new homeland among the deep forests in the wide caverns of Vanidriell, under the light of the Great Crystal Baetylus.

Note: I was provided a copy for review

This book is a great introduction to the Chronicles of Acadia series and the world in which it is set. There is a gradual development and introduction to the people and environment, increasing slowly through the novel while still being quite intense at times, giving the reader time to adjust to what is happening but without being too slow moving or leaving them without explanation. There is clearly room to grow and develop further in the series allowing new discoveries to be made for the readers to enjoy not only in the story, but also in expanding on the structure of Almond’s world and with his characters,

The main characters are the Walker brothers, Logan and Corbin, but there are numerous others that bring this story to life and give it its intricacies, complexities, and twists and turns and hidden secrets. I liked Logan, he is cheeky, a trickster, and doesn’t take life too seriously. He is skilled and clever, but chooses to look for fun in life rather than work. And while he tries to do what is right, sometimes that does not always go as planned, but he is always willing to help people, even those he has just met.

The best expression of Logan’s character is when he is forced to run after being accused of a crime he didn’t commit. He does his best to understand what has happened, and even though he is helpless, he stays strong and stays determined in his plans. This is where Logan’s character is really shown, away from the jester. He is resourceful and clever, and knows what he wants; something that is evident at other times throughout the novel as well.

Corbin on the other hand is almost the opposite and as a character he is intriguing. As the younger brother he takes things more seriously and it is clear he is easily swayed by those in authority. He is influenced and warped by others with their own agendas, but he is also a caring brother and loves the people around him. He is skilled and trained well, and being a hunter in his village it is these skills he uses to track down his brother and try and bring him back. With his own determination Corbin is driven by loyalty and duty, but there also clear indications of love for his family and friends. I liked that it was the older brother who was immature and played around instead of typically the younger one, and there is also a great dynamic between the Walker brothers that alternates between love, irritation, and jesting.

The world Almond has created is creative and clever, not only with the history and cause for the underworld’s development, but also the intricate society and different towns and cities that make up the world. What was interesting was the culture of the people in Riverbell. They weren’t primitive but they were almost from a combined selection of different eras, somewhat tribal in their culture and society, very proper and formal in their speech and manner, and just clearly a simpler time in their lifestyle, all rolled into one. Each place has a different manner or dialect, but what was curious about Riverbell’s was their somewhat formal nature as well as their naivety to certain things. In a weird way it brought this novel back to reality, seeing these different locations and contrasts reminds you that it is still kind of based in our world, but at the same time it is worlds apart. Being below the surface the people are raised on the culture they are told, with the history of the old world being passed down through generations. I liked that while the world is in the future, and the concept seems advanced and detailed, the people are not always as advanced or futuristic.

There are many moments where you think the story is going in one direction but then it doesn’t. It feels like you are going along a story path only to have it changed suddenly to something else. This means you are never quite sure what will play out, but the world and concept Almond has designed offers a few parallels to the real world, but it also opens up a new place of exploration.

While I enjoyed the start of the book, curious and engaged even with the events, it wasn’t until the end of the book that I really got into it. But that was after getting to know these characters and after new revelations, twists and turns, and a bit more of an understanding is established about the world. I lost a little interest for a bit somewhere around the middle though. I’m not sure why, whether it was pace, the story, or something else, but it soon peaked my interest even stronger towards the end. By the end of the book I wanted to read the next one and I am eager to see where this story is headed. Almond hasn’t given too much away with his first book but what he has revealed shows it is certainly heading towards something captivating and hopefully towards more answers to help unravel the mystery we’ve been introduced to.

Hand of Chaos by J. Hamlet

Published: 4th September 2013
Goodreads badgePublisher: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
Pages: 313
Format: ebook
Genre: Fantasy/Supernatural
★   ★   ★  – 3 Stars

Exhausted, cynical, and confused, Anna is always there to report for duty. She’s part of a clandestine government team that defends the nation against supernatural terrorism-which, in all honesty, is enough to drive anyone to drink. Toss in a fear of intimacy with a desire to have friends and lovers like a normal person and, well, Anna is a walking, talking contradiction, albeit one wrapped in a special agent with arcane, magical powers of her own. And at five-thirty in the morning with a zombie-infested apartment building in the heart of Washington, DC, you’ve got the makings of the worst morning…

Note: I was provided a copy for review

When I finished this book I was trying to find the words to describe it and interesting is what I came up with. Hamlet has created a story that is curious and engaging by giving us a supernatural aspect to our world that also looks at religious figures in a different way. Nothing is explained in detail to you, instead snippets and hints are referenced throughout and while there is a lot untold, what is revealed is adequate for the events in the story and still manage to help create rounded and detailed characters.

This style of writing doesn’t leave you confused, though in some ways you really could have a detailed background on each character because they are unique and fascinating, instead you tend to just accept who they are and move on, learning more about them through their actions rather than explanations. Hamlet also uses dialogue and narrative to allow the reader to pick up on details about these characters and still lets you discover more even towards the end.

I enjoyed the story Hamlet has created. It is a good concept and while a little daunting as you take in the grand scale of this supernatural world and the characters in it, it works really well and draws you in, each character playing their role well. Hamlet uses this fantasy/supernatural aspect wonderfully with complicated and complex details and depth making them believable and real, and helps the reader easily understand and accept that it could occur.

We are dropped into this story at the start of a new case for Anna and it is through this initial event that we start to understand the world. The supernatural elements are interesting because while the story takes place very much in the real world, the supernatural side is a hidden and secret part with magic and necromancers involved in our everyday lives, plus there is a curious take on religion that brings out the darker sides.

Since we are thrown into this alternate reality you must work to keep up with not just the story but discovering and learning about it as well. This makes it interesting and Hamlet’s engaging characters pull you alone nicely. They are very real and are able to acknowledge their flaws. With many background people involved though it can easily get confusing at times but nothing over the top and they all play a part in the overall story.

As a villain Ethan plays his role well. His cause is justified in his eyes and he is clever which makes him an interesting and engaging adversary. Anna and the others in the team are all different as well and through the story you pick up more of what they do and who they are. We are casually informed through the narrative and dialogue but there are moments where information and certain details are provided for reader purposes.

I thought there may be a sequel but it isn’t part of a series which is a shame because I could read more about these characters, learn more about who they are and see where the events of this book take them. This doesn’t mean there isn’t enough to satisfy. A good concept, interesting and well executed narrative plus engaging characters bring this novel together and while it is unique and creative, it is also consistently interesting and with enough reality, supernatural, and action balanced together, it keeps you turning the page and makes you wonder if there really is a little bit of the supernatural world hidden in plain sight.

 

Edit: I have just been informed it is going to be part of a series so that’s great! I look forward to reading the rest and seeing where it goes.

Book Expo Australia: Sunday

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Today I attended the second day of Book Expo Australia and while some things were the same, other bits were different. Having gone on Saturday there was not as greater need to wander the stalls but I had some time to kill before my first seminar so I took another lap and found a couple more that were interesting. I swung by the Booktopia table and noticed they had the new John Marsden book on display which wasn’t there yesterday. It looks awesome, and I used all of my self control not to just grab it and run off before anyone could stop me. I will have to wait for its release just like everyone else.

The crowd seemed around the same if not slightly more than yesterday. Like before there were places where there were a lot of people while others had very few so depending where you stood if looked either empty or busy. The fighting knights returned which was fun to watch, and at one stage there was a princess and a knight fighting . As I was getting lunch nearby I could hear the announcer asking whether the pirate would beat the Scotsman in the next battle. The consensus around the food cart was the Scotsman, naturally.  A few minutes later this was confirmed.

One of the differences I noticed was that they had started announcing the seminars that were on which was really great. Just before they were starting an announcement was made and told us what ones were about to start and what rooms they were in. This was great because while we were given a basic list of what seminars were on (if you didn’t print the schedule straight from the website), having them told to you reminded you they were on and where, plus let you decide if you wanted to make any last minute decisions on going to something.

The first session I went to was Writing Children’s Books. With only three of us in there it was very intimate but Michael Stone from Little Steps Publishing did a fantastic job. Lynette Ralston was supposed to join him but he told us he couldn’t find her, but unlike yesterday when one presenter was absent, Michael did a wonderful job on his own. He talked to us about the numerous avenues of getting a children’s book published, and the processes involved. He also showed us some of their published books and the ideas behind them and the effort that went into them. It was fascinating to hear about how something as seemingly simple as a picture book comes to be and it is a lot more complicated than people realise. With word limit restrictions and decisions to make about illustrations, design, book size and the all important cover, it was amazing to hear about how these books are created.

I also went to the 7 Sins of Publishing. That was also a great session. Dan Kelly from Boolarong Press was funny, inclusive and engaging meaning you couldn’t help but have fun. The sins were what you’d expect: thinking writing the book was the easiest part, not understanding all the work that goes into it later or how important editors are, as well as the importance of marketing and the problem with thinking that traditional publishing is the best option.

My last session was supposed to be another short story session, but after 15 minutes of waiting and having to go an ask a volunteer what was happening, we were informed that no one was coming. It wasn’t officially cancelled like the one yesterday; the presenters just didn’t show up. I asked how could they have forgotten, and if they had wouldn’t the announcement remind them but it turns out the announcements were stopped because people it seems were complaining that it interrupted listening to or giving readings. Which just seems incredible insane to me, for 10 or 15 seconds once an hour or so to let people know what is happening it disrupted people listening to readings so much everyone had to suffer. It was certainly a better system than having to watch poor authors and presenters trying to spruik their own sessions from the door to those within shouting range.

Considering the two short story sessions were pretty much the reason for going to this expo, it’s hard not to be disappointed that they were the real let down of my weekend. Overall I would like to think the weekend was a success in some ways, but in others there were some clear problems. Being the first year it is hard to judge, and the volunteers did their best with what they had but you can’t ignore the fact that being there you wouldn’t help feel that some of it was a little unorganised. It was an interesting contrast that the same event could produce. Presenters not showing up and seminars being cancelled was certainly the biggest problem for me. And with only one food cart and two coffee carts certainly limited the choices for lunch. But on the other hand, the people who ran their stalls did a wonderful job. There was a lot of information to take and you get to talk to many different authors, people, and publishers throughout the day. And what seminars that did run were often very good and even though a few had issues, the remaining ones were excellent. They were helpful, informative, interesting, and the presenters were really passionate about what they were discussing. I learnt a lot from those, and as per usual, came away filled with inspiration and a desire to go home and write something.

I am looking forward to seeing how the Book Expo will improve next year, maybe a few lessons perhaps can be learnt from its first year. Already set up with a date in October 2015 it hopefully will be a bit more refined, while still maintaining the bits that made it great this year.

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