The Donor (Part Two) by Nikki Rae

Published: 22nd August 2014
3349b-goodreads-buttonPublisher: 
Self published
Format: ebook
Genre: 
Young Adult/New Adult
★   ★   ★   ★   ★   – 5 Stars

The Donor Part Two Cover Final[Disclaimer: This is a serial novella that will be told in parts about the length of a short story (20-30 pages).]

When Casey joined MyTrueMatch.com, she never imagined she would meet a man who not only helps her pay the bills, but has been nothing but a gentleman.

As the nose bleeds make way for worse symptoms, Casey can’t help the feelings she has for Jonah, despite how he may never return them. And he’s been keeping things from her. Big things. How does he make his money, and who is that girl in the picture?

With the clock ticking, can she find the answers she’s looking for?

 Note: I was provided with a copy for review

This second installment in Nikki Rae’s novella The Donor doesn’t waver one bit from the interest sparked in part one. It is captivating and generates great curiosity, even offers a few more answers. The intriguing nature of the story gets you in and it is very easy to read, making it hard to drag yourself away from the story. Being so brief it does not take long to get through but despite being short, Rae manages to put a lot of mystery and interest into the story.

While there was a lot of unspoken things in part one, part two allows us to see more of Casey and Jonah’s relationship, as well as learn a bit more about Casey and why she went to MyTrueMatch.com in the first place. Flashbacks are again used in how Rae tells us about Casey’s life and her motives, but through clever dialogue and a creative narrative we are also given a few clues about the mysterious Jonah. Hints and clues are gradually dropped throughout but Rae does not spell anything out obviously.

I love how Rae is slowly revealing things to us, making us piece it together. She uses Casey’s thoughts, her conversations, and the events around her to tell us what is happening rather than giving the reader information just for the sake of knowing. The mystery is what makes this a great story and it keeps you guessing and makes you excited when you figure things out. So while we are learning a bit more about these characters but we are also given a puzzle to solve which is great.

In terms of style, Rae captures the uncertainty between the pair and the new, strange relationship they have with one another extremely well. Casey’s uneasiness and embarrassment about her condition are evident as you read, but you also see Jonah’s compassion as a result. The other complexities of Casey and Jonah’s relationship are expressed well and there is a nervous uncertainty coming from them both that gives the story a believable element. Rae uses these feelings to express great compassion from each character but also manages to draws it out from the reader as well.

Reading this story makes you realise Casey knows a lot more than the reader, she knows what she is doing and what she has gotten herself in for, and it is only slowly that the reader is able to find out. Rae does not write like Casey is telling us her story exactly, aside from flashbacks a lot of information is provided in dialogue or through Casey’s thoughts; we are mainly observers, having to piece it together ourselves. This is a great approach in my opinion, especially being a multi-part novella there is limited space and in focusing on the story there isn’t a lot of room or opportunity to stop and explain to readers, especially without ruining the surprises.

As evident with her Sunshine novels, Rae is a wonder at surprises and great, gripping narratives and this is another example of her skills. By the end you are hanging out for the third instalment and you are left excited and curious about where the story and characters will end up.

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Outshine by Nola Decker

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AuthorPicNola Decker is the only writer in Seattle who doesn’t drink coffee. She makes up for her happy and healthy childhood by writing stories in which terrible things happen to young people. She loves salted caramel anything and Fridays.

 

 

Published: 11th April 2014
Goodreads badgePublisher: 7 Sparks Press
Pages: 324
Format: ebook
Genre: Young Adult/Science Fiction
★   ★   ★   ★   ★  – 5 Stars

When agoraphobic Gabe and his outgoing nemesis Jessa go on a moonlit road trip to locate Gabe’s missing brother, the two teens discover they are both hiding unnatural abilities: Gabe is a living lie detector and Jessa is a kick-ass powerhouse pretending to be a delicate diva.

Gabe’s sole reason for searching for Watts, his hot-tempered younger brother, is to clear his own name: he’s been framed for Watts’ alleged murder. Jessa is after Watts because she is, well, after him.

They find him with Deacon, the twisted eugenicist. He encourages them to stay and join his “Family” where they’ll be able to live openly as the genetically-modified freaks that they are. When Jessa and Gabe uncover the truth about Deacon’s past–and what he wants for the future–they band together to stop him.

 

Note: I was provided a copy of this book for review

Books like Outshine that start off great and only get greater are the little gems in the book world. I loved this book, I loved the concept and the idea behind what was happening and I loved everything from the start of the book until the final page. It is a great story that grabs you from the moment you start, not in exciting drama or anything initially, but through the characters, it’s their voice and their actions that keep you reading. It grabs you, holds you and it only tightens its grip the further you read.

While the synopsis is good, and got me interested in the story, it isn’t until you start reading you realise it doesn’t prepare you for the story you are actually going to get. Not in a hugely different way, it is basically the same, but there is a lot more going on than you are led to believe. Whether I misread the summary the first time I don’t know, but the story I got was so much more amazing than I thought it would be. I am not going to say much because it will ruin the surprises but I will say that I loved the world that Decker created, I loved the story she has created, and I loved all the characters she filled it with.

The two main characters are Gabe and Jessa. The contrast between Gabe and Jessa are excellent, and their story only gets more interesting as you go as hints, surprises, and twists are dropped here and there. You learn more about who Gabe and Jessa are, the secrets they have had to hide, and the toll it has taken on their lives and how they see themselves as people.

Gabe is a great character, he has the potential to come across as quite bitter and could be really cynical, and you could claim that he is, but it doesn’t make him a solely depressing character that you don’t get attached to. Decker makes you care for him and feel concerned for him. Being inside his head makes you understand why he is how he is and the further you get through the story you understand a lot more.

Jessa on the other hand has a few secrets of her own, with different abilities comes a different coping mechanism and she takes a different path than Gabe, one that appears to be idyllic on the outside. It isn’t until we get to see a little more of Jessa’s thoughts and point of view you learn that not everything is as it appears to be and she is hiding more than just one secret.

One of the things I loved was the clever way Gabe and Jessa’s abilities were presented; they are explained well and executed skilfully, they seem natural and real and completely believable. Altering between Gabe and Jessa’s perspective is a great move because it allows the reader to get inside the head of each person and explore their abilities. With each trying to hide their abilities, an internal struggle and debate is what is needed to tell this kind of story well, creating compassion for characters and sympathy when needed. By switching between the two voices more can be conveyed than sole first person or even third person, it allows us to be in the minds of both key characters, balancing the narration and exploring two very different experiences that have a common origin and goal.

I do not know whether there is going to be a second book; personally I would love to keep reading about Gabe and Jessa, not to mention the world they live in. There was a moment in the story where I thought it was hinting at the possibility but even if there isn’t going to be any more books about them there is enough in this story to keep you satisfied. By the end of it there is a great sense of completion and a conclusion that leaves you contented, if not a little bittersweet, but there is also an air of uncertainty and mystery as well which generates a great feeling of untold possibilities in your mind.

 

I loved that the story never went where I was expecting it to, there were surprises and twists, but even if they weren’t always huge, they were fascinating to read. The unexpected nature and the uniqueness of each character made this story great. I could not put this book down, I did not want this book to finish, and by the time I was done I was a little bit emotional. It was wonderful.

 

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Tears of the River by Gordon Rottman

Published: 4th June 2014
Goodreads badgePublisher: Taliesin Publishing
Pages: 168
Format: ebook
Genre: Young Adult/Adventure
★   ★   ★   ★   ★  – 5 Stars

Fifteen-year-old Karen Herber is exactly where she wants to be—in the Nicaraguan rainforest with a volunteer medical team. What she had not expected was a hurricane collapsing a bridge to wipe out her team and a mudslide burying a village. Only a Nicaraguan six-year-old girl and a forty-four-year-old woman with both arms broken survive the mudslide. Then she finds that Jaydon Bonner survived, a privileged, arrogant seventeen-year-old American tenderfoot. Academic and confidence concerns are already dragging Karen down and she was tagged a “weak leader” in Outward Bound School. Her doctor parents are pushing her into a medical career, of which she’s uncertain. Less than fluent in Spanish, but an experienced backpacker, the reluctant leader is challenged by Nature, animals, desperate men and her fellow survivors’ mistrust and cultural differences. Their only path to salvation is a risky boat trip down a rainforest river, 150 miles to the mysterious Mosquito Coast. Karen soon finds her companions’ experiences, so different from her own, invaluable with each deadly encounter forging a closer bond between them. Through all the danger, “Jay” is there and manages to come though.

Note: I was provided a copy of this book for review

Tears of the River brings you the unexpected and it does it with style, realism, authenticity, and great characters. This is a wonderful story, Rottman pulls you in from the start with the characters and narrative and you find yourself never wanting to put the book down. There is also a great adventure tone that grabs you and is filled with the uncertainty of survival and the ongoing threat of failure that drives not only the characters, but the reader as you keep reading to see what else could possibly happen to them.

The story is told by Karen, an excellent move by Rottman because you get a great sense of who she is and the situation through her eyes and thoughts. She is also a great protagonist. She is knowledgeable about a lot of things; she does what’s right and uses her knowledge without being cocky, arrogant, or unlikable. She knows more than she thinks but she doesn’t know everything which shows great contrast and makes her very human instead of being unbelievable and too good at everything. You also forget she is only fifteen, and while she can replicate the skills and information she has been taught there are the pressures of the situation that seep in, there is only so much information can help when being as young as she is, coupled with the general shock of the whole experience before you break. Karen even mentions that she is saving her break down for later, she is pushing through with determination, and you sometimes see the cracks forming, it only makes her even better.

In a story so adventurous it is also wonderfully realistic. Karen is under no delusions about how tough it is going to be, no minor inconveniences like camping and a lot of work, but she is prepared for a lot of things. She has experience, she has read and seen a lot, and she has had practice in various situations, but while she knows what to do, she lacks confidence in her abilities. This does not deter her and she is determined to succeed regardless which makes her think on her feet and try anything, only adding to her character in my opinion. And while she claims she is not a leader you only have to watch as she pulls herself together to save not only herself but those around her. She doesn’t see just how much of a leader she is, but she does a wonderful job.

There are other key characters besides Karen: Jay is a seventeen year old from America, and there are two people from the village, forty four year old Tia, and six year old Lomara, each bringing their unique personalities to the story. With the language barrier with Tia and Lomara you only really grasp their personalities in how they act and react around Karen, while Jay is a lot more forward.

Jay starts out as being very arrogant and spoilt and I would have thought he would be a better person after being saved but it seems even accidents can’t change personality. Even so, I thought it would make him realise where he was and the situation they were in and be a lot less unhelpful. Personally I think he’s jealous. After awhile you watch him with Karen, what he says and does and it seems like he may even be a little embarrassed. He mentions later that he doesn’t know how to do anything with a slight ashamed tone but also with a sense of admiration for what Karen can do. The culture of the Nicaraguan people is that women don’t do certain things, certainly not all the things Karen is trying to do, and men are the strong ones who have their role to play in society, making Karen a constant target for Tia’s disapproval. But even when Karen asks for Jay to help he can’t, he has never done anything to help in the situations they have found themselves. This doesn’t excuse his behaviour in the beginning but by the end you understand him a bit more, he’s embarrassed and jealous watching her do the things she does and hearing how knowledgeable she is. Even Tia, an early and ongoing critic of Karen, slowly learns Karen is more than capable.

Due to the mixture of American and Nicaraguan characters there is a continual switch between English and Spanish which actually works really well. Working with a language barrier of two characters can be hard, especially in having to continually translate not just for the reader but also for the other characters. The format and style in which Rottman solved this problem was great and it never jarred or felt out of place, it allowed you to keep reading uninterrupted by the switching languages.

While there isn’t a high level of action or suspense, it is not without its drama in some form and Rottman makes even the menial seem interesting. The writing style is wonderful and clever because without needing it to be filled with suspense and a continual read of drama on every page there is more an ongoing interest and intrigue in where they will go and what they will do, you sort of marvel at how this little band of people survive and try to rescue themselves. There are so many obstacles they face on their journey, different things that have varying levels of danger and threats but you also don’t wait for bad things to happen either. Its great writing that only adds to the feeling of authenticity.

The writing is clever as well in that we often find out what we need to know long before we knew we needed it. Karen’s survival knowledge and her skills are explained creatively early on, as is her stamina, her description, and history, meaning that there is no need to stop a key moment in a scene to explain why she knows what she does, or how she is able to do these things, you just accept that she can because you know in the back of your mind that she had done the training, was taught a skill. It’s something that I really liked because it meant the crucial moments weren’t broken up, and it was very natural in how it was explained, never feeling like we took time from the story to explain everything.

Having Karen as the narrator made this work well, and with her mind wandering and connecting current experiences to those she had done before reads like we are inside her mind, and we are, we see her think things through and watch her mind connect it to other things.

Without spoilers, I will say I love how Karen is written through the whole book, and the others, but I especially loved her at the end. Rottman portrays her exhaustion and weariness well, she has spent all her energy trying to save these people and herself, jumping between two languages and by the end of it she doesn’t know which one she is supposed to speak anymore. She is running on autopilot and it’s brilliant to read, to watch her on the verge of crumbling into a heap but still trying to make sure everyone is ok. The fatigue and injuries are portrayed so well and you feel what she goes through.

I came out of being fully immersed in this novel realising that at every turn I was worried that their biggest obstacle would be if they lost the boat but Rottman shows there is so much more than possibly losing a boat to worry about. There is logic, real experiences and real consequences and Rottman shows that anything is possible. My favourite quote comes from Karen and it sums up this story brilliantly: “You can do anything, once you realise you have to.” That also sums up Karen’s character really well, and while she starts off with doubts about her leadership skills and chances of saving everyone, there is a wonderful change in her character as the determination comes through and she realises she has to, no matter what.

The slogan for the publisher Taliesin Publishing says “Discover authors and stories that echo in your heart long after the book is closed” and this is so true for Tears of the River. It is a story that I adored experiencing and one that will stay with me for a long time and one I look forward to rereading one day.

 

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Freak of Nature (IFICS #1) by Julia Crane

Published: 9th January 2013
Goodreads badgePublisher: Valknut Press
Pages: 284
Format: ebook
Genre: Young Adult/Science Fiction
★   ★   ★   ★   ★  – 5 Stars

Note: I was provided a copy for review

Donate Body to Science. Check.

When seventeen-year-old Kaitlyn checked the box, she never suspected she’d have her life–and her body–stolen from her. She awakens one day in a secret laboratory to discover that her body is now half-robot and is forced to hide her own secret: that she still has human emotions and a human mind. If the scientists who made her find out, they’ll erase what remains of who she was.

Kaitlyn finds an unlikely ally in Lucas, a handsome, brilliant scientist who can’t get over the guilt he feels knowing she was once a vibrant, beautiful young woman. He never expected a science project to affect him the way she does. As he tries to help her rediscover her past, he finds himself falling for the brave girl struggling to find her place and acceptance between the human and computer worlds.

*For mature teens due to some sexual content.

I really enjoyed this book. The story Crane has created and the characters and environment she has developed is one that is not only engaging, but also one that keeps you reading. I found it very hard to put this book down, always wanting to keep the story going, follow where the narrative was taking me and what these characters were doing.

What I often find myself thinking about with books is whether they are plot driven or character driven. I am tempted to say this is character driven, but coupled with this is an equally interesting plot. As you read you become invested in Kaitlyn, all her thoughts, her attempt to hide the fact she has emotions from those around her, and the conflicts she has dealing with her new technology filled body. You also discover Kaitlyn has been designed for a purpose, and we gradually discover what that purpose is. The balance between plot and character is excellent and Crane manages to use both to draw the reader along at just the appropriate moments.

The pace of the novel is well executed; there is a gradual build up filled with interest, curiosity, and even minor suspense. The narrative is one that while it seems not a lot is going on, a lot is, and as a result it pulls you along and you want to know what is happening, what has happened, and what will happen.

The narrative focus switches from Kaitlyn to Lucas on occasion, something which is also balanced well. You don’t need a lot of Lucas’ point of view to tell the story, Kaitlyn’s is the perspective that you want to follow, but Lucas provides readers with the other side, how people view Kaitlyn not just how she views and acts around them. One of the great aspects of Crane’s writing is how she has demonstrated the robotic aspects of Kaitlyn and how they conflict or differ from the human mind that has remained. The duality is clearly shown but there is no overload on technical aspects, but there also isn’t so little that you forget they are there or that make the story seem unconvincing.

What I enjoyed most about reading Crane’s story was Kaitlyn’s character. Kaitlyn is interesting because despite the fact she has emotions, she is not entirely human, there is a lot of technology that makes up her system and this is evident in her conversations with people, how she interprets certain situations around her, and how her body responds. She is highly logical and with the mind of a machine she is able to act and interpret things quickly, but there is still a part of her that is unable to fully grasp all of the human and social complexities. While she has the emotions of a human, she lacks the capacity to fully understand their meaning, and while she understands the language just fine, the confusion regarding colloquialisms and slang remind us that she is still mostly machine and that certain phrases and actions have no meaning to her. The best comparison I could come up with was it is like understanding the language but not the local phrases, while also seeing the entire human race as a foreign species. It is wonderfully done.

I liked the ending, it was a slight surprise but it made sense, it suited the story. It rounded off the entire novel well and leaves room to continue into the next book. Crane has done a wonderful job with this novel, she manages to explore a great idea through great writing and great characters in a way that even in the last few chapters keep you guessing and learning more and by the end leaves you eager to see where the next book will lead.

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The Donor (Part One) by Nikki Rae

Published: 14th July 2014
3349b-goodreads-buttonPublisher: 
Self published
Format: ebook
Genre: 
Young Adult/New Adult
★   ★   ★   ★   ★   – 5 Stars


[Disclaimer: This is a serial novella that will be told in parts about the length of a short story (20-30 pages)]

The Donor Cover FinalCasey Williams and her family are poor. Her parents work non-stop and so does she, just so they can keep the trailer roof from leaking.

They’re getting by fine enough when the headaches start. Then there’s the nosebleeds. And the inevitable doctor’s bills.

Fortunately for Casey, there’s MyTrueMatch.com: an exclusive, quick, and almost easy way to pay it all back before her parents even have to know.

All she has to do is give a man she’s never met whatever he wants from her body.

Inside or out.

Note: I was given a copy by the author to review

As a novella that is to become a larger story, this is an excellent introduction. The Donor is a short read but it is also one that grabs the reader’s attention early on. Not necessarily with grand action or immense tension or suspense, but rather with intrigue and curiosity. I think the coupling of reader curiosity with vagueness and mystery in the story are brilliant ways to capture this story. There is something to look forward to, something that makes the reader keep reading, hoping for answers to questions and unprovided explanations.

Casey as a character is interesting. She is independent and loyal, willing to do anything for her family, even if that means keeping secrets from them. As we get to know her we are told about the trouble she and her family have been experiencing, and we also see how much she wants to help without creating additional burdens. I thought of her as a tad foolish in the beginning, not misguided necessarily but maybe a bit easily swayed. Having said that I also understand her actions, and even if I thought she was unwise in the early pages by the end I was more understanding and began to see her as a bit more as brave than foolish, especially after more is revealed.

Through this story Rae doesn’t try and sway readers into one particular opinion or view of Casey which easily could have occurred. A lot of how you see her comes from your own assessment of the actions and circumstances that are presented. There is no strong push to gain sympathy through language or long emotional character thoughts, though that doesn’t mean sympathy of some kind doesn’t form. Based on the information given, and how Rae seamlessly weaves it into the story, readers are free to make up their own minds and judge Casey accordingly.

What I thought was excellent was the way the story has been written and presented. In terms of narrative direction Rae leads you into thinking one thing, and even if you start forming your own alternate theories and expectations she throws you off course again with a simple sentence, something which Rae is extremely skilled at doing. There are flashbacks woven in with present events which draws out the mystery and the answers you are waiting for while also providing us with history and back story allowing the story to progress.

It’s wonderful writing, and writing that keeps you engaged while still offering surprises. This story is not written with a focus on constantly keeping you in suspense however, just under a slight blanket of intrigue as you read along. There is also a wonderful joy as you read and become caught up in clever writing and a very well laid out and very well told story.

With The Donor Rae entices you, surrounds you with vagueness, mystery, a brilliant narrative, and half given answers that leaves you demanding more.

 

Author Bio:
Nikki Rae is a writer who lives in New Jersey. As an independent author, she has appeared numerously on Amazon Best Seller lists and she concentrates on making her imaginary characters as real as possible. Nikki writes mainly dark, scary, romantic tales, but she’ll try anything once. When she is not writing, reading, or thinking, you can find her spending time with animals, drawing in a quiet corner, or studying people. Closely.

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