One of Us is Back (#3) by Karen M. McManus

Long Lost Reviews is a monthly meme created by Ally over at Ally’s Appraisals which is posted on the second Thursday of every month. The aim is to start tackling your review backlog. Whether it’s an in-depth analysis of how it affected your life, one sentence stating that you only remember the ending, or that you have no recollection of reading the book at all. 

Published: 27 July 2023 (print)/27 July 2023 (audio) Goodreads badge
Publisher:
Penguin/Penguin
Pages: 368/10 hrs and 12 mins
Narrator: Shannon McManus, Holly Linneman, Robbie Daymond, Jeff Ebner
Format: Audiobook
Genre: Young Adult Mystery/Thriller
★   ★   ★   ★ – 4 Stars

At first the mysterious billboard seems like a bad joke: Time for a new game, Bayview. But when a member of the crew disappears, it’s clear this ‘game’ just got serious – and no-one understands the rules.

Ever since Simon died in detention, life hasn’t been easy for the Bayview Crew. First the Bayview Four had to prove they weren’t killers. Then a new generation had to outwit a vengeful copycat. Now, it’s beginning again.

The thing is, Simon was right about secrets-they all come out, eventually. And Bayview has a lot it’s still hiding.

Everyone’s a target. And now that someone unexpected has returned to Bayview, things are starting to get deadly.

Simon was right about secrets – they all come out in the end. 

This I’m resigning into a Long Lost Review because my notes are few, my memory of it is non-existent, and even the blurb is giving me nothing. I have a few notes but don’t remember much from this book. Even reading plot summaries nothing is sticking. Given my notes are about it being a bit confusing probably has something to do with it.

As the story starts there is a pause to recap previous books as characters are introduced. It’s seamless enough, but it’s a lot to recap given the complexity of previous books which makes it a little wordy and awkward all the same.

The cast has grown which is acknowledged, there are a lot of people to keep track of, and to mix the old ones in with the new and bring new readers up to speed and refresh memories is a lot. With the return of previous characters you can see growth, how they haven’t changed, how they are beyond high school even though it hasn’t been that long.

I have given it four stars so I must have enjoyed it, but maybe also I enjoyed McManus’ writing style, enjoyed returning to these characters, and maybe the plot was good and interesting at the time but isn’t one that sticks.

You can purchase One of Us is Back via the following

QBDDymocks | Booktopia

WorderyBlackwell’s | Angus & Robertson

Fishpond | Amazon | Amazon Aust | Audible

Lola and the Boy Next Door (#2) by Stephanie Perkins

Published: 1 June 2011 (print)/11 October 2011 (audio) Goodreads badge
Publisher:
Usborne Publishing/Books on Tape
Pages: 384/8 hrs and 59 mins
Narrator: Shannon McManus
Format: Audiobook
Genre: Young Adult Romance
★   ★   ★ – 3 Stars

Lola Nolan is a budding costume designer, and for her, the more outrageous, sparkly, and fun the outfit, the better. And everything is pretty perfect in her life (right down to her hot rocker boyfriend) until the Bell twins, Calliope and Cricket, return to the neighborhood. When Cricket, a gifted inventor, steps out from his twin sister’s shadow and back into Lola’s life, she must finally reconcile a lifetime of feelings for the boy next door.

I am well behind the hype for Perkins’ series, though I did experience all the Anna hype at the time, it took me a few more years before I got a chance to read it. But then I never continued with the series. I’m not sure whether Anna didn’t drive me enough to want to keep reading, or it was one of those ‘one day’ books and then suddenly years have passed. The important thing is, I was not a fan.

I don’t think enough was put on the fact twenty one year old Max got together with Lola at sixteen. I know Lola is our perspective so it’s not going to be balanced but I didn’t like it. By the time the story starts Lola is seventeen, Max is twenty two, and they’ve been dating a year was a surprise, I thought it was relatively new. I couldn’t understand why a guy in a band, who tours the country, old enough to drink and be in bars would be ok dating a sixteen year old. One still in high school, with all the childish drama, and be happy with that? It’s not like he was eighteen or nineteen. Are we meant to think it was because he really cares about her? It adds another level when he starts calling her Lolita and all the red flags already raised are suddenly waving around.

Lola’s parents do the best they can in her situation – making Max have weekly meals with them, keeping track of what they’re doing in a non-invasive way. Lola admits that they know if they enforce anything harsher or make them stop seeing each other it would only push them closer. It doesn’t stop her lying and sneaking around though despite the trust they’ve put in her.

Her dads were great characters, and I really enjoyed their scenes and their relationship with Lola and one another. They were fun and interesting and supportive. The Norah element was interesting and spread nicely through the story. You can definitely see Lola being burned before by her birth mother and being the selfish person she is having little understanding of what it means beyond her own feelings.

Aside from the Max thing, the actual story was fine. Lola is a quirky girl who goes to extreme effort in her outfits and how she presents herself. It’s amazing she gets away with it at school, but it is a creative hobby for her.

The whole story arc with Cricket and his family was interesting and I liked how it naturally came together by the end. I can see how everyone thinks it’s sweet and it is, but at the same time Lola doesn’t deserve Cricket. He’s too nice for her.

So much of the praise for this book goes towards Lola and her relationship with Cricket, which isn’t for most of the book. She’s angry at him, wary of him, slowly comes to be ok with him all while still dating Max. Her issues with him are valid, though her absolute fear at them returning was a tad over the top.

Once the story focused more on Cricket and Lola’s friendship the story was better, with a title like this you know how it will end, I just wish there’s been a better way to get them together without having to read about creepy Max. There was enough hurt feelings and history to build on where we didn’t need to normalise that kind of relationship.

You can purchase Lola and the Boy Next Door via the following

QBDDymocks | Booktopia

WorderyBlackwell’s | Angus & Robertson

Fishpond | Amazon | Amazon Aust | Audible